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first part
reporter from la times saw them together at mc donalds on september 23, 2000 around 10 pm. they were sharing one medium fry, rootbeer and chicken mc nuggets. the reporter seen michelle finger feeding barang with french fries and barang also finger feeding her with a nugget covered with b b que sauce. barang- so what other sports do you watch and play? mk- oh, i like watching gymnastic, tennis and basketball. i play basketball and tennis whenever i have time . barang- what a coincidence, i also watch gymnastic, tennis and basketball and play them. mk- oh ya? what other sports do you watch and play? barang- well...i also watch pool/billaird, beach volleyball and diving. i play pool and little bit of volleyball. mk- really? barang- really. mk- well, how about we play tennis after my practice tomorrow? barang- are you serious? mk- yeah! i'm dead serious. barang- well then. it's a date! i mean....okay. mk-pick me up at 6:30 , is that a good time for you? barang-anytime is a good time with you. they finished their food and barang drove michelle back to her place in manhattan. barang got out of his car and opened michelle's door. such a gentleman michelle said to herself. he walk michelle up as far as the treshold of her place and said their goodnights. michelle was going to kiss barang but he pulled back. he said "i'm different from other man and will not take advantage of you.when we become steady then i'll kiss you". michelle- so when are you gonna ask me? barang is a straight forward type of person, he doesn't use big words to impress people and is annoyed by unsincere remarks and vain people. so when michelle ask him the question above, he simply gave her a simple one. barang- i'm waiting for the right moment, but i guess this is the right time. i love you michelle, will you be my girlfriend? mk- oh! yes! yes! and yes! michele leaped forward to barang for joy and he catches her. their eyes met and slowly, barang put michelle down and tenderly kiss her. mk- would you like to come in? barang- oh, it don't think it's proper and beside, it's late, i'd better be going now. i'll see you tomorrow, sweet dream my princess. mk- goodnight, my prince michelle look through the window and watched her prince drive away. tonight, two less people in the world are gonna thank GOD for a new form relationship........ |
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#2
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, I am ROTFLOL, speechless but laughing. Barang might have just redeemed his s-i-l status with Beth, and maybe skatingfan.
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#3
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seeing you rotflol, my confidence is back!
there some truth in the story including the next installments. just want you to know.
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#4
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second part
6:30 at healthsouth, barang was outside the locker room waiting for her to come out. michelle- how long have you been waiting? barang- i just got here. do you still have the energy to play tennis? michelle- are you kidding?, i'm like the energizer bunny. i keep going and going and going... barang- that i believe. boy! you are in top shape. how do you do that inspite of busy schedules? michelle- first of all, i eat right. second, exercise regularly. that's how i stay in top form. as for busy schedules, well it gets tough at times but if you know how to balance it and know your limitations, you'll be alright. you're not bad yourself, what do you do to keep in shape? barang- like you, i try to eat healthy food and regular exercise. but my busy schedule is nothing compare to yours. mine is like a mole and yours is like a mountain. michelle- you can say that again. michelle put her arms around barang waist and lean her head against his chest. barang in turn hug her gently and kiss her on the forehead and said "i'm fortunate to have you shelly, it feels like i'm dreaming. i still can't beleive that i'm holding you and having this conversation with you. michelle- why? because i'm a celebrity? to tell you the truth, it's hard for my status to find a genuine person to have relationship with because i don't know if they are after my fame or money. but with you, i'm 100% sure that your real. i feel safe and comfortable with you. barang- i'll try my best to always be here for you everytime you need me. are you ready to hit some balls? michelle- let's go. off they went to manhattan tennis court....... |
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#5
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Wow barang! I LOVE your story! It's sooooooooooo funny! I can't stop laughing. hehehehe hahaha moooooo mooooooo hehehe
Are there any more?
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Thanks barang! I'm glad you're such a gentleman with our girl
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#7
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liz d- 2 mooooooooooooore parts coming.
i'll try to finish them this week.sharon- a lady of this kind deserves respect and honor. glad you enjoy the story. 8) part three is coming up. |
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#8
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third part
8:00 pm when they stop playing. michelle- hey barang, wanna watch movie? barang- what do you like to see? michelle- let's go watch space cowboys. barang- how about "cells" michelle- naah! that's one stupid movie. barang- okay, space cowboys it is!. michelle- pick me up at 9:00. barang- see you at 9:00. they both went back to their own places and took a shower and put on a casual outfits. barang left his car at michelle's place as requested by her. they use michelle's convertible acura nsx instead. they went in to the theater at 9:15pm and left at 10:30 pm. immediately they drove off and when barang ask her what's the hurry? she replied " i'd like you to meet my parents". barang- what???????? but....but....but.... michelle- relax, they don't bite.barang- ahhh.... ahhh.... ahhh... michelle- what's the matter, the cat got your tongue? barang- you are enjoying this aren't you? michelle- ha! ha! ha! don't worry, they are cooooooool. you'll see. barang- you promise? michelle- i promise. 11:15 pm when they arrived at her parents house. got off the car and rang the door bell, danny opened the door and greeted them and let them in. michelle- hi dad!, hi mom! barang- how are you sir, mam? danny and estella- good, yourself? barang- i'm fine, thank you. michelle- mom!, is the food ready? estella- yes, everybody! in the dinning room. at the dinning table..... danny and estella made barang feel at home by telling jokes and relating their stories before michelle was born, how life was in the old days and how they got in to this country. barang is now very comfortable and felt like he knew them for a long time. so he felt like he's bold enough to ask these questions. barang- sir, can i call you daddy? danny- no! barang- how about dad? danny- noo! barang- how about father? danny- nooo! barang- can i call you mommy, mam? estella- no! barang- how about mom! estella- noo! barang- how about mother? estella- nooo! barang- gee whiz! tough crowd! they all laugh........ |
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#9
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, I have created a monster.
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#10
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i'm no longer barang, my new name is franky stein. thanks monster i mean master skatingfan.
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#11
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ROFLMAO!!! Hand me a tissue barang... quick, before i explode!
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#12
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no hadas, what you need is a towel! but wait, i have the final part coming up. so don't explode yet, okay?
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#13
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final
barang- i know it's not my place to suggest this but because i'm really concern of michelle's safety, i'd like to talk about her convertible nsx if you don't mind? michelle, danny and estella- let's hear it. barang- would it be better if michelle traded her convertible in to non convertible? the reason is, she's an easy target for kidnapp or carnapp especially when sitting on a red light. she can be easily grabbed or ......you know what i mean don't you? michelle- you are right, it never occurred to me of what you've said . estella and danny- thank you for caring for her safety. our daughter is fortunate to find a guy like you. just like me fortunate of having danny as my husband. barang- stop it you guys, you're making me blush. michelle- why don't you quit your job and work for me as my protector? danny and estella- yeah! barang, please be her protector. we'll feel much better if you're around her when she's out. barang-as much as i want to, it'll be too expensive for me to move here. michelle- not to worry barang, you can stay at my house in lake arrowhead. nobody lives there anymore. pleasssssssssssssssssse. besides, you don't have to travel back and forth from here to san jose, and we'll be together all the time. what do you say? barang-ahhhhhh....ummmmmmmmmmmmm...... danny and estella- please, for her sake? barang- oh! alright. michelle, estella and danny- yipeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!! danny and estella- here's a toast for michelle's better future and future husband, barang. |
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#14
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Oh you are so cute barang! Thanks
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skatingfan I think our s-i-l is baaaaaaccccckkkkk!
barang you just brought the biggest smile across my face that won't go away!
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#16
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thanks sharon, oh! i've got to ask you if you really meant
it?
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#17
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mom beth, were you wearing your pampy when you read my gorgeous, incredible, out of this world, masterpiece story?
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#18
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ROFL!!!!! Barang, hand over the towl!
you ARE cute! we need more stories! |
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#19
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hey guys.... i found out that i am so CUTE! see what an ugly writer becomes right after his/her story is released. the latest confirmation was from hadas.
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#20
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barang. No, I wasn't wearing my pampies but I was wearing my depends Keep them coming.Hadas do we need to take you to the Doctor's? Please don't give barang a bigger head then he already has
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#21
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LOLLOLLOL Beth! barang's head isn't big....
scrool down! more like humongus! |
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#22
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you know i'm kidding!
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#23
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LOL....LOL!!
you guys just crack me up!!!! stop,stop!!! make more and maybe i'll start a river!!! kidding! |
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#24
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Hadas!Okay skatingfan where is the tough question? |
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#25
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hadas, do you have to show my brain? now everybody knows my i.q. level. :b
now beth, my head is not that BIG! hadas just showed my forehead.
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