Michelle Goes to the mall: Part I

michelle is at the mall inside the SKATY FASHION shop with her fans.



michelle-humm? should i get the purple or pink dress?

beth2000-i think you should get that green one, you look fabulous in it.

mk4ever-no way i think, she should get the red one.

michellefanforever-hi girls!!!

nicolemarie-wait a minite this is totally fake. michelle's not here!

Liz D.-nicole's right! come on, let's get a slushy.

michelle-hi Liz D.,and Nicole.

nicolemarie & Liz D.- h..hh.i!

michelle- which one do you think i should get?

G Man- MICHELLE!!!!

Jarret- Michelle's here!?

michelle- yep!! it's me! that's my name, don't sware it out.

camille2001-i'm so hungry!

michelle- i am too! let's go get something to eat and GREASY BURGER.

michelle- G MAN,Jarett?? Would you guys like to join us??

Jarett and G MAN- uhhh....SURE!!

To Be continued: at the GREASY BURGER

Cool story! Can't wait for the second part.
BTW, did you make up Greasy Burger? I never heard of it.

thanks shorty skater girl!!! would you like to be in it?????

Cool story mk4ever! Thanks for putting me in your story! Can't wait to read the second part.

[Skatingfan2002]

Mk4ever that is a cool story, could I be in it? Thanks

[michellesmom]

Ooh, can I be in it, too? I love to go shopping!

Sharing a "Greasy Burger" with Michelle Kwan?!?! Now what guy with excellent taste and an appreciation of beauty (Michelle, not the burger) wouldn't jump at THAT chance - please put me in the story!!! I can the smooth talking guy who who charms all the girls until he sees Michelle, then he just stutters and blushes......... LOL

Brad

Thanks you guys!!!

sure skatingfan2002,michellesmom, and TaraWebmasterBRM, i'll put you guys in the next episode!!!!!!

GREASY BURGER.......HERE WE COME!!!

Sorry I didn't respond soon enough, but I'd love to be in part II.

It's okay! i'll put you in the contest zone.(next chapter)

[GMAN]

Loved the story!!!! Loved my part too

LOL!


could i be in the next one?