Michelle Goes to the mall: Part I

[mk4ever]

michelle is at the mall inside the SKATY FASHION shop with her fans.



michelle-humm? should i get the purple or pink dress?

beth2000-i think you should get that green one, you look fabulous in it.

mk4ever-no way i think, she should get the red one.

michellefanforever-hi girls!!!

nicolemarie-wait a minite this is totally fake. michelle's not here!

Liz D.-nicole's right! come on, let's get a slushy.

michelle-hi Liz D.,and Nicole.

nicolemarie & Liz D.- h..hh.i!

michelle- which one do you think i should get?

G Man- MICHELLE!!!!

Jarret- Michelle's here!?

michelle- yep!! it's me! that's my name, don't sware it out.

camille2001-i'm so hungry!

michelle- i am too! let's go get something to eat and GREASY BURGER.

michelle- G MAN,Jarett?? Would you guys like to join us??

Jarett and G MAN- uhhh....SURE!!

To Be continued: at the GREASY BURGER

[shorty skater girl]

Cool story! Can't wait for the second part.
BTW, did you make up Greasy Burger? I never heard of it.

[mk4ever]

thanks shorty skater girl!!! would you like to be in it?????

[Liz D.]

Cool story mk4ever! Thanks for putting me in your story! Can't wait to read the second part.

[Skatingfan2002]

Mk4ever that is a cool story, could I be in it? Thanks

[michellesmom]

Ooh, can I be in it, too? I love to go shopping!

[TaraWebmasterBRM]

Sharing a "Greasy Burger" with Michelle Kwan?!?! Now what guy with excellent taste and an appreciation of beauty (Michelle, not the burger) wouldn't jump at THAT chance - please put me in the story!!! I can the smooth talking guy who who charms all the girls until he sees Michelle, then he just stutters and blushes......... LOL

Brad

[mk4ever]

Thanks you guys!!!

sure skatingfan2002,michellesmom, and TaraWebmasterBRM, i'll put you guys in the next episode!!!!!!

GREASY BURGER.......HERE WE COME!!!

[shorty skater girl]

Sorry I didn't respond soon enough, but I'd love to be in part II.

[mk4ever]

It's okay! i'll put you in the contest zone.(next chapter)

[GMAN]

Loved the story!!!! Loved my part too

[Hadas]

LOL!


could i be in the next one?