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Cherie
April 7th, 2000, 01:22 AM
Congratulations Michelle, and once again you have inspired me to write another poem for you.
I would like to share it with you now.

Michelle's Red Violin
by Cherie Abbott

The air was filled with a haunting tune
from a single violin.
The crowd was tense but mesmerized
in hopes that she would win.

She skated with such elegance,
power strength and speed.
In landing all her triple jumps
she surely did succeed.

Performing first within her group
could unnerve any skater,
Knowing judges reserve marks
for those who may come later.

She gave it everything she had
from the beginning to the end.
To all of those who had doubts,
a message she did send.

It had been quite a challenge
Juggling skating and school,
Having found the right balance,
she proved she's no fool.

Her artistic perfection
was second to none,
Rewarded with Gold
when it was all said and done.

Her face all aglow
from her radiant smile,
Her joy and excitement
will last a long while.

Had she not won the Gold
she'd have still felt the same,
For she skated her best
living up to her name.

So on top of the World
she stands yet again,
In her velvety dress
from "The Red Violin."

Jenny
April 7th, 2000, 07:45 AM
Cherie -- that is so beautiful!
Did you want to include it in the special project thread?

kwanluv
April 7th, 2000, 12:33 PM
Cherie - that brought me to tears...beautiful and inspired!

Good job <!--EZCODE EMOTICON START ;) --><img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/images/emoticons/wink.gif ALT=";)"><!--EZCODE EMOTICON STOP-->

Cherie
April 7th, 2000, 05:12 PM
Hi Jenny, I'm glad you liked the poem. I'd love to include it in the project. I'm making a plaque myself for Michelle, but you can include it in your project. Should I e-mail you? How exactly are you doing this? I haven't read too much about it yet.
Oh BTW in the first stanza, 4th line, it should say "in hopes that she would win." I left out the "a"
in the word "that". I noticed it after the fact, but haven't seen the edit button for a little while now. Are we not allowed to edit anything anymore?

Linustm511
April 10th, 2000, 01:20 PM
Hi cherie
Great poem, I wish i could write poem like you. I just send the check to you for the Mk's tape, I think that you will receive my check on this wednesday. Have a great day Cherie, cannot wait for your tape.

Jenny
April 10th, 2000, 03:28 PM
Hi cherie, I saw that you added your poem to the other thread -- great!

The edit feature is still active.... you do have to be logged in though for the "edit" link to show up.

TaraLipinski87
May 7th, 2000, 01:00 PM
wow, that is so good!!!!!!!!!