"Destiny" A story about Life (not about Michelle, but me)

[WorldsGreatestMK]

Please comment :D



Life has been hard for me. I'm a pudgy but tall guy. I have no friends, no girlfriends, and being with my family gets harder. What is my destiny, what do I have I supposed to do with my life. I don't know.

My name is Jake and I live in the city of San Jose. I go to school, and even there people see me as a piece of trash waiting to put garbage. That's how it feels to be me. I've tried to talk to many different people and get to know them so I can say I have friends. But somehow, they are my friends for a day and then ignore me the next day. That's not a real friend. Maybe it's because I am me. But I can't change that. It's me. Somehow I have to find out what my destiny is. Right now or at least soon.

I have friends. Yeah I do. I guess you can say that at the tender age of fourteen, most people will not think of their parents as friends, but I do. They brought me to the world, and for that I should be proud. But why? The most important question.

My name is Jake and I live in the large city of San Jose, but what is my destiny? I don't know. Let's just hope that life leads me towards it....sooon!!! :D

[michelle2006]

Awwwwwwwe!

[WorldsGreatestMK]

Was it too sad? :D Can I write a good story? Any new story ideas? Any questions?

[michelle2006]

You should expand on the idea of who you are and how you'll find your destiny. You can also express what you WANT to make of yourself and your life.

[WorldsGreatestMK]

Okay, I will try to improve on all that :D

[Lisa Seye]

I am close to 40 and my best friend is my Mom. So, don't feel weird about having family as friends. They are with you for the long haul.

[WorldsGreatestMK]

Ok, Lisa :D